Manhasted's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ONEY2012]

Lord Voldemort!

[KetchupVsMayo]

Voice acting is natural and decent but can be improved...that's why I gave this submission 3Stars.
No animated lips? -1 Star
Clunky Arms? -1 Star
Script...decent +0.5
Overall, concept about different sauces fighting over flavor has the potential for a lot of creative wordplay. Background...uhm, work on your arm and moth animation first PLEASE!

[Villans Are People Too]

I felt awkward watching it
Not enough effort is put into it. Ok, let me put it in perspective from the people watching it. Clunky animation, boring to watch...unless it's detailed which this one isn't, more fps or picture detail. Awkward voice, stings doesn't it? Practice your voice acting as if you were talking naturally to someone else because your words feel forced. Impersonating stand-up comedy also helps but whether we like it or not some people have to practice voice acting where others do it naturally. Awkward long no at the end, don't do that to your audience. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
See this as constructive criticism and creatively work on the things I just mentioned, all entertainers start out horribly. Overall Ratings

Animation: Clunky
Voice: Dull
Script: Awkward
Art: Rushed

tvgravy responds:

ok thanks man

[Chat Rooms]

Nice animation but the background ruined it
Like a lot of animations, this has potential to be proper entertainment. You included enough movement so you know what it takes for smooth movement but wasting that potential away on a on a storyline where a PC/MAC randomly eats a guy to symbolize a computer dominating your life isn't worth working on (I think that's what you meant with the symbolism). First write a draft, refine that draft into a better mini script and then you start working on it. Slaving away on an animation that isn't worth making is obviously a bad choice. Plan your project, good luck and enjoy the power of creativity

DylanSparano responds:

I understand what you mean about writting a story line, but wasted potential is a little harsh for an animation that is not ment to really have a storyline. It's just symbolism, but for my next animation I will use a script. Thanks for the advice.

[Police Station]

This has potential, make another animation with a refined script and a bit longer. Random jokes are funny...to some but it's hard to make randomness funny with good voice acting. What I suggest is, include more movement and extend the clip with a refined script. I know it's hard to animate properly but if you want to be part of the good animators then you have to, well...animate. This is constructive criticism...I'm also being generous with the 2 stars

[Goldeen Loves Guitar]

Sounds like shit coming from Ash, irony at its core. Great flash, 5/5 because making a good flash is hard to do and this one looks pretty professional.

[Short and Sweet]

Le Friendzoned! I get you blue bro

[Inanimate]

Brilliant!

What should I animate?
I know...let me animate myself trying to figure out what to animate!
Thanks for making me laugh

[PP - Parable of the Lute]

Wisdom at its finest

This was wonderful and made me feel peaceful inside.
I practice meditating daily and noticed a lot of health benefits. Still overwhelmed by the mind but it's "improving", if I can describe it in that way.
"Let's think about an answer and then we'll be at peace", no
"Let's not think", yes
Thanks, glad to see the world is slowly but surely becoming more and more peaceful and in tune with nature
Namaste